Wednesday 12/12—Day Thirty
1:10 Dismissal Schedule
When You Come In
1. Staple
the Fifty-Word Story worksheet ON TOP of your typed fifty-word stories.
2. Put
it in the drawer.
3. Grab
your folder off the front table, and start logging in your stuff.
FYI
·
Don’t put
anything in the drawer except on-time work from now until the end of the
term. If you have make-up work (not late
work, but make-up work), check the gradebook to make sure you can still turn it
in for points, then give it to me. From
now on, I will put a note in Powerschool for every assignment, and it will
contain the relevant information to show you what the deadline is for
completion.
·
If you’re
concerned about your grade, check Powerschool and/or the blog for starters.
·
From now
until the end of the term, we are using the WHS Student Handbook policy for
make-up work, which states you have two days to make up an assignment given
when you were gone. If you don’t make it
up and give a printed copy to me in that time period, you are not eligible for
any points on that assignment.
·
Why? I am spending too much time tracking these
things. It means I have less time to
read and respond to the work you hand in on a daily basis.
Poetry Revision:
Autobiographical Poem
1.
We are
revising today to a second, almost-final draft.
2.
Pull out the
rubric for this assignment, but remember we are not filling it out until FRIDAY
when we create our final draft.
3.
This piece
is an assessment performance, so I’m grading it in a targeted way. This may also be a piece you can use in your
portfolio. So take your time today with
revision. Make it the strongest you can.
4.
If I didn’t
read your poem yet, I WILL read it before we revise to the FINAL DRAFT on
Friday in class.
5.
If I did
read your poem, please read my comments carefully, and think about them.
6.
I’m going to
go over the requirements for today’s revision time now.
7.
When I hand
out the revision directions and models, you should this page as a checklist for
your revising today.
8.
Keep
this handout in your folder for Friday
as well.
9.
You’ll make
AT LEAST ten changes, and probably many more.
Autobiographical Poem Revision to Second,
Almost-Final Draft
1.
Think about everything I’m saying as it relates to
YOUR POEM and the changes you might make to it to make I stronger.
2.
Look at the following snippets, and consider the
following in your own poem:
·
Am I using vivid detail (appealing to one of the
senses)?
·
Am I being creative in my responses—not just
throwing down the first thing that comes to mind?
1) Title
·
Raise your hand if you have the word “Me” in your
title.
·
Look at the following titles that do NOT have “Me”
in them. What makes them strong?
·
A Whole
Different Window
·
Casting Into
Carissa’s Life
·
Just Like
the President
·
More Than a
Blonde Cheerleader
·
The Name I
Got, the Name I’ll Keep
2) Line Breaks
We have talked about line breaks
a lot, but I’m wondering how carefully you’ve considered how and why you are
breaking your lines. When you have four
details on a line, it’s hard for the reader to absorb all that. Look carefully at your breaks. Is the word at the end of each line a
powerful one?
Unfortunate older brother
Who
is always blamed for everything
Every
time
* *
* *
Who gives hugs to the people I love
And nothing to the people I don’t particularly like
3) Concrete Detail—SPECIFICS!
(SHOW who you are; be
specific and descriptive; the reader can hear a PERSON there!)
Who needs a faster
internet connection
Some ice cold Mt. Dew
And mostly, crispy, stuffed, Hot Pockets
Who feels great after a
long run by myself
Who gives feed to his
cattle food to his grandpa’s fat dog when he is in Texas
Who would like to be a
sous chef at the Hyperian Golf Course in Des Moines
Who would like to see a
Christmas wedding, tinkling lights in the dark cold night.
Lover of the rain
The sweet country air in
the Fall
Sweet-and-sour
filled Twizzlers
And stargazing on those beautiful summer nights
4) Order—what’s first?
Second? Third? It matters!
Who fears staying home
alone at night,
Drowning in a lake when
it’s dark,
And making wrong decisions
throughout my life.
Who
fears being alone
Pennywise
the Dancing Clown, you know—IT!
And
Randy Schrader
5) Strong Diction
·
Lover of
large rooms illuminated with dim candlelight.
·
Who fears
being an outlier
·
A prisoner
of Washington, Iowa
·
A speck of
dust in Washington
·
He is the
denizen of a glass box (instead of “resident of”)
6) Sibling of….
Sometimes
a best friend,
Sometimes
a complete enemy
But
always a sister of Anne, John, and Michael
Sibling of a future
engineer (Alfonso)
Brother of a librarian
(Angel)
Brother to an annoying
younger sister (Aylin)
The
mature, older (even if younger) sister to a college freshman,
6) Alliteration
·
Who fears
seeing spiders scamper across my floor…. (s)
·
Queen of
quirky (q)
·
With two
smaller siblings (s)
·
Who needs to
sleep as much as a sloth (s)
·
Fat from
wrestling (f)
General Reminders
·
Are all the important words in your title
capitalized?
·
Are your lines broken where you INTENTIONALLY broke
them, for greatest effect?
·
Have you included specifics: examples, colors, textures, sounds, details?
IF You Finish
Revising
1. On google drive, star at least
FIVE pieces you are considering for your portfolio.
2. Open one of them, and start making
revisions—changes to make the piece stronger.
3. If you finish one, open another to
work on it, and so on.
College-Prep Reading
12/12/2012
Day 29
College-Prep
Reading
The Renaissance and Reformation
1.
Review your worksheet from yesterday. What can we note on our whiteboard timeline?
2.
Please turn this worksheet in when we finish with it
today. Make sure your name is on it
first though.
Foster “Sonnet” annotations
1.
Words you didn’t know?
a.
Astute
b.
Sagacity
c.
Ubiquitous
d.
Idiosyncratic
e.
When did the sonnet originate?
2.
What can a sonnet be?
3.
What are its limitations?
4.
What clues or tips did Professor F. give you about
reading a sonnet, then examining it more closely?
5.
What does he say about the difficulty of writing
something short?
6.
Please turn this in when we finish with it today. Make sure your name is on it first though.
Reading: A sonnet! J
Edmund Spenser: “Amoretti LXXV: One Day I Wrote Her Name
1.
Read it aloud one time through.
2.
Begin again, and annotate, line by line as you read.
3.
Begin again, and note the form: rhyme, rhythm.
How are We Doing on Our Plan for the Week?
1.
Finish viewing and note-taking on The Dark Ages. DONE
2.
Understand the big picture of The Renaissance and
Reformation.
3.
Differentiate one era from another.
4.
See similarities between eras, where applicable.
5.
Continue culture discussion.
6.
Read English Renaissance poetry, mainly sonnets.
7.
Examine and apply techniques for how to explicate poetry.
8.
Consider the pendulum….
Sonnet Work Time--You and a Partner
1.
Complete the Sonnet
Comparison Chart.
2.
Read, annotate,
and explore Shakespeare’s Sonnet LXXIII.
3.
Do not take the
butt-weasle way out and just google, “What does Shakespeare’s ‘Sonnet LXXIII’
mean”.
4.
Keep both these
completed items until tomorrow (but remind me to take them for a daily grade).
Vocabulary
·
13,000 grains by classtime Friday
Before You Go
1.
Turn in your Professor Foster annotated blue pages,
please.
2. Due Tomorrow
a.
Annotated Shakespeare poem
b.
Completed Sonnet Compare/Contrast Chart
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