Wednesday 12/12—Day Thirty
1:10 Dismissal Schedule
Autobiographical Poem Revision to Second,
1. Think about everything I’m saying as it relates to YOUR POEM and the changes you might make to it to make I stronger.
2. Look at the following snippets, and consider the following in your own poem:
· Am I using vivid detail (appealing to one of the senses)?
· Am I being creative in my responses—not just throwing down the first thing that comes to mind?
The mature, older (even if younger) sister to a college freshman,