Welcome to Creative Writing!
Thursday--January 17, 2013
When You Come In
1. Please initial next to your name on the clipboard.
2. Pick up the
handout called “Poetry—Commenting, Revising and Editing” from the circle
table”.
Vital Information About Class
1.
The Blog: www.kdubzclasses.blogspot.com
2.
Bookmark this site now.
3.
Take the oath of
I-promise-I'll-never-come-in-and-ask-you-"Did we do anything when I was
absent yesterday?" :-)
Around the Block—Sharing and Peer
Conferencing
Peer Conference Preparation
1.
Take a look at a sample peer conferences--solid examples of
excellent conferences.
2.
The only thing I want you to
do differently is comment on google drive, typing, instead of on a paper copy
of the poem, in writing.
3.
Discuss how to COMMENT on google drive. I’ll use Matt’s Autobio Poem as the guinea
pig.
4.
Read the Poetry—Commenting, Revising and Editing sheet.
5.
Put a star by three questions you want answered about your poem.
6. Type those three questions at the bottom of your Around the Block poem.
7. Share your poem on google docs with the person I assign you.
Peer
Conferencing
1.
Read your partner’s three questions, so
you know what they most want you to comment on.
2. Using the COMMENT function, make at least TEN
comments on each other’s poems.
3.
When you think you’re done, count your comments in the right margin,
to make sure you have ten.
4.
Finally, answer each of the questions
your partner typed. Type your answer
underneath each question.
Vocabulary Variety Handout—for
all those occasions when everyday vocab just won’t do!
Revising
to a Second Draft
1. Read
your comments, then make at
least ten revisions to your poem to make it stronger. Here’s what you can do to
revise:
a. Add
words
b. Delete
words
c. Switch
words and lines around
d. Take
out one word, and substitute a stronger one
e. Make
a strong title.
f. Make
all your line breaks strong.
2.
When you
think you’re done, click on “FILE”, then “SEE REVISION HISTORY”. Count how many revisions you made—do you have
at least ten?
3. Share
it with me (“Kerrie Willis”) on google docs so I can read it AND edit it.
4. Bag
your computer.
When
You Finish: Reading
Assignment (page 6) and Earthbook
1.
Read and relax . (This
means you read for enjoyment. J )
2.
If you’re reading a piece, and you stop enjoying it, turn the
page!
3.
Did you find a piece you though was really strong? Or really funny? Then record it on page 6.
v Can we finish
this today? Or do we need another
fifteen minutes tomorrow?
Homework
None
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